Wednesday, December 14, 2011

New poem~ The path of the heart~ opinions and suggestions for a better title please.?

I love the title cant say that changing it is a wise move this is part of the poems overall structure and powerful word play.. Don't change a thing in my opinion it is fantastic how it is I give it an easy 10 im impressed to see a male writer also so keep up the good work complete thumbs up!

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